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A Wolf Amongst The Sheep by ~MrLoneWolf:iconMrLoneWolf:



A Wolf Amongst The Sheep
By MrLoneWolf

I’m a wolf. The blood of a predator, coursing through my veins. While looking to sate my hunger, I find myself happening across a flock of sheep. Scanning the flock for my next potential victim, I spot something, so out of place. A black sheep amongst the white sheep. You’re so irresistible, my vision tunnels. It’s like the sight of you is calling out to me.

“Please, I want you to take me away and feed upon my body”.

I’ve made up my mind. I must have you. The predator in me rages as I snap into action, chasing your image. Laughing maniacally as the other sheep scream and shriek in terror of me charging their once peaceful flock. Disperse for every sheep for themselves. Though, something is off. You stand your ground. Unaware and oblivious to the chaos I’ve caused.

Shouldn’t your instincts be telling you to escape?

I force that thought aside and think another.

Seeing the look on your face, quivering below me, will make up for the thrill of the chase you deprive me.

I’m so close I can imagine what you must taste like, when you slowly turn towards my direction. Giving me hope that you might see me and run. So, I can have my chase. But, with each passing degree you remind me of something. Each detail adding upon the other, as you turn. When your transformation ends, all the puzzle pieces are in place. Giving the whole picture. Stopping me dead in my tracks.

A wolf in a sheep’s disguise.

Taking a look into the eyes before me. I can see a hunger that hasn’t been satisfied for ages. With no other sheep around those eyes are now focused on me, turning me pale. The tables have turned and taking a glance downward I see a wide, sly smile that tells me I’ve been lured into an ingenious trap. Snared by surprise. I try to flee, but in vain, I’m brought to my knees. I shut my eyes waiting for my cannibalistic demise. I’ve been tasted. A tongue dragged across my cheek. Sending my heart skyward, through my chest in fright. Turned to stone as this predator gets a more substantial taste. Taking little nibbles on my ears, downwards, under my chin. Sucking my soul through my neck. I can’t help wonder if I taste good, as to be having my flesh savored.

What am I thinking? I’m about to die!

The torture is unbearable. I was hoping for a quick death. Flinchingly, I wearily open my eyes to face my impending doom. To find a different kind of hunger displayed in the eyes of my predator. I realize what my predator wants and go in to shock. Turning on myself in self-denial.

This can’t be happening. I must be dreaming.

I take another glance and sure enough, my would-be predator is starving from my non-reaction. I see that I’ve been beaten and dominated by the unrelenting kisses, wrought upon my lips. I give in and surrender my body to the victor. There was only one thought running through my mind. While we helped each other sate our burning desire.

I don’t know why the sheep complain so much; it’s not so bad being eaten alive.
©2008-2009 ~MrLoneWolf
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Author's Comments

I feel so pumped about this one. I'm proud of myself for coming up with something.

This is a short story as you read, you will find a bunch of twists and turns...

Comments are always welcome and encouraged.

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:iconslackercat131313:
It a Great One-shot. Really... Not really much of a plot, since you make sound like seme(the punisher) and uke(the receiver). You being uke the poor defenseless little innocent prey and the black sheep being seme the dominated lust crazed predator. It’s a yaoi reference But to me. It sounds like your in the closet if you catch my drift.

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Read the story over again.

Dude where is your head? I didn't put gender in the story. I made sure of that, so it's a more universal story.

So, how is it in way referenced to homesexuality?

Also the black sheep is a wolf in disguise.

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:iconslackercat131313:
yeah but you make it sound like your the the wolf in the story. I don't know maybe my I'm just in lalalala land. still it something that has actually peaked my interst.

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:iconmrlonewolf:
Dude again read the story more carefully.

First line, first sentence, yes "I'm a wolf."

The wolf in a sheeps disguise. A wolf with a black sheeps skin or camo. Get it yet?

There are two wolves.

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:iconslackercat131313:
whatever dude...

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Those who spam me
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:iconmusicianssunset:
Haha, Mike i'm glad to know you're gay? (it's really not so bad:P )
anyways, this warnets a fave my good sir.

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I can't tell if you're teasing me or not.

Well, for good measure, I'm very proud of my heterosexuality, but if it's any constalation my brother is gay.

- MrLoneWolf

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edit: Constellation (spelling error)

ps: I've been hit on by gay guys and it creeps the shit out of me.

Most people think I'm Asexual though.

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:iconmusicianssunset:
really? you've known me for all this time and never told me this? can i meet him please? i don't know any gay guys and i want to. ... is that weird? (and no, david lambert doesn't count as a gay guy.)

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:iconmrlonewolf:
When did my story become a forem for the topic of Homosexuality?

Yeah, sure next time he comes over I'll let you know. It's like one weekend per month.

I wasn't to sure about it two years ago. First he told me he was Bi and pretty recently he's told me he was gay. Maybe close to a year ago.

I always suspected that he was gay. A few times when I'm looking through the history on the computer their was gay porn sites. I was always thinking that my mom was looking at the stuff, but it was him that was (He admited to it).

I didn't tell you because it never came up really. You never asked. Plus, I'm a practical guy. I don't throw words around with no meaning that much.

No, it's not weird. And who is david lambert?

- MrLoneWolf

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